W8 Memior Dear Shoe Ayming


 

 

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Prewriting

 

 

 

 

 

Planning

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Draft

Dear Shoe's,

  Thank you for keeping me from getting hurt and being wounded all the time. You keep me very warm during the winter, but you make me smell really super bad sometimes. Shoe's, you keep me warm all the time, but your Friends called sandals, give me fresh air, wind on the open sours, and i don't stink at all, or sweaty in the heat when i wear them. So, shoes and sandals, you pretty much protect me from getting glass, rock's, twigs, wood, and other things stuck in me or on me where i could get cut off because of a bad infection. So Thank You!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Final Draft

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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What did you do well in this project?

 

 

 

 

 

What will you do to improve next time?